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That Moment When You Realize You've Been a Jerk

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That Moment When You Realize You've Been a Jerk
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Danny McLimmon 3rd Nov 2019, 10:23 AM edit delete
Danny McLimmon
I wrote and rewrote the dialogue on this page so many times that I can only hope it has the impact I want it to. Bracy and Allison are two characters who don't seem completely comfortable letting down their guards against others, and I was hoping this could be a scene where they both do that to a small extent, creating a tacit bond of mutual respect. I don't know how well I hit that mark, but I'm still learning how to be a good storyteller.

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wesley-draws 4th Nov 2019, 10:58 AM edit delete reply
wesley-draws
VIOLA! I kind of picture the last panel as like a Team Rocket-style tearing off the glasses and hats with one of their songs playing in the background.

Glad that Bracy's finally coming around. I think she kind of disarmed him by calling him out but not just storming out after. I think the dialogue was successful here
Danny McLimmon 4th Nov 2019, 8:05 PM edit delete reply
Danny McLimmon
Thanks, Wesley!
mitchellbravo 30th Nov 2019, 10:27 PM edit delete reply
mitchellbravo
Coming at a jerkish person with sincerity and kindness is sometimes the only thing that can really throw them off and get them to drop their game.